The reason why mining is unprofitable for any new entrants is because the large, established miners are able to set the equilibrium of profit margin. In other words, I would say they can crowd out smaller miners. Maybe there is some kind of confusion or disagreement on the semantics of “crowd out.” Regardless, the “why” behind the problem you stated is that profit margin equilibrium has been set by large miners near or less than 0%.
I’m not sure what you mean by “the problem of returns-to-scale for large miners”, but my point is not that larger miners are even disproportionately profiting - it’s that they are exclusively profiting. Mining is unprofitable for everyone else because of the absolute dominance of established large miners. Mining being unprofitable for new entrants, and the small number of existing miners are not at all separate factors! It is not coincidental or accidental that mining has evolved this way, it’s how the incentives are hard coded into the protocol.
The longer you can bid at 0% profit, eventually you will exhaust your competition of resources, at which point they have no choice but to drop out, and you make a profit. When profit margins are extremely high, miner competition is expected - but this very act reduces profit margins for everyone, and as profit margins approach 0, game theory suggests the dominant strategy in the current mining design is for tacit collusion between a few, extremely well capitalized miners to arise (especially in this perfectly digital, algorithmic pricing context of PoX).
In PoX’s current design, there are only benefits to being a very, very large miner, no disadvantages - and all it takes is pure capital. This is unlike PoW, where mining at a very, very large scale requires much more capital yes, but also better/more infrastructure, logistics, maintenance, scarce hardware, physical space, and legal/regulatory permitting if a business. Yes, all these are attainable with more capital, but they introduce additional challenges and complexities beyond just purely holding more capital.
What’s easier to buy, Bitcoin to mine via PoX? Or electricity, wiring, internet bandwidth, cooling, hardware, physical space, permits, and labor to mine via PoW? Obviously buying Bitcoin to mine via PoX is vastly simpler - thus you would expect a narrower distribution of miners in PoX that is more correlated with capital resources than in PoW.
IMO, until PoX incorporates some function to emulate the real world constraints of PoW to reduce the cost efficiencies for large miners, you will continue to see very few miners, and mining that is unprofitable to join. These are two symptoms of the same root cause: that large miners unequivocally get to set the equilibrium profit margin, and can do so at or below 0% for longer than anyone else (and this is further exacerbated by stacking rebates).